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Doesn't look bad. Have you thought about taking the lines from the center of the hood out to the outside at the base of the windshield and having them meet up with the lines down the side? Make them flow together.
Not in a million years would I consider putting lines and flakes on a beautiful rare color (and rare in general Targa) It is your car something totally up to you though. You can see swirls in the paint I would get a paint correction. That color looks so good after its paint corrected and sealed.
Neat idea.
The gold looks good with midnight blue.
But I think I would drop it down onto the paint and not above on the window.
That reminds me of the striping I put on several people's cars back in the 80s.
Also, I might remove the Targa, and leave it blank.
...and YES, you need a paint correction from someone who knows what they're doing first.
It would look SO much better.